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4th draft of music video- amended changes from feedback

Plumtree

Emily, this video is coming on really nicely now and your lip-syncing is excellent. Have a look at the choruses and see if you could interweave them so that the shot duration is not so long. Look to edit these to add more variety to your editing and keep the audience's interest. I am not sure about the shop front being used; you could cut this out and move the other clips so that when the lyrics mention diamonds, your clip of the diamond necklace is on screen at the same time.
Ancillaries are coming on and the plan for the digipak looks good. Keep working on these and post any subsequent drafts.

DigiPak Planning

Here is my plan for my Artist's DigiPak

3rd Draft of Music Video