Evaluation One

Fifth DigiPak Draft

Plumtree

Emily - Well done for getting everything posted!


Positives:

• Your digipak is much better now it is more original and it has a much better sense of continuity across all four panels
• The website looks good and links in well with the album it is promoting.
• Your video has a really good feel to it and the transitions work very effectively, especially where you have now changed the choruses so that the shot durations are not so long.

Areas for improvement:

• Your digipak panels need to fill all the available space so that there is no white border around them and I still think the blank panel needs something on it - a quote/thanks/band members...
• You could add more to the biography section on the website as this looks a little lacking in detail.
• There are still some issues with the lip-synching on the video. Watch it really closely and make a note of areas that you could try and tweak in order to get it all as accurate as possible. The problem is, so much of it is seamless that it makes moments where it is out of time more obvious!

Artist Website

https://0emilyharding0.wixsite.com/lanadelrey

First Website Draft

First Draft

link to a saved copy of my first website: https://0emilyharding0.wixsite.com/first-draft

Fourth Digipak Draft

Third DigiPak Draft

Plumtree

Emily, your digipak is too much of a recreation of the original and therefore lacks a certain creativity. You also need to find a way to link the panels so that there is a greater sense of continuity across all four panels. At the moment, you have one that is sharp and full colour, one that is blurred and sepia and another that is sharp black-and-white. You also need to add detail to the plain panel; maybe a list of the band, credits, thank yous, some lyrics?

5th Draft of Music Video

(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A2s-_nW31VE)

Second DigiPak Draft

First DigiPak Draft